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"A poem of Thanks"

About: Paediatrics / Ward 6 South West Acute Hospital / Paediatric Services

(as a service user),

A Poem of Thanks (with a Twist of Real Life)

To Enniskillen’s gentle crew,

And Derry’s finest healers too,

To nurses, docs, and kind ward aides,

Whose care cut through our fear like blades—

This note of thanks is just the start,

You’ve mended more than just one part.

Our daughter, small but brave,

Fell from her horse—Lilly, wild and grave.

Her arm gave way, her courage didn’t,

Though pain arrived, and mercy didn’t.

At first. But then—you all appeared,

With hands that soothed and words that steered.

We met a hundred faces bright,

All asking questions through the night,

All poking, prodding, checking scans,

Yet somehow made us feel like fans

At center stage in care’s great show,

Where everyone was in the know.

She laughed on gas, she spoke in Queen,

An English accent, quite the scene.

But laughter turned to silent screams—

The bone held fast, dashed all our dreams.

And off we went through hole and hill,

To Derry’s doors, through sheer goodwill.

The pins went in, the pain went down,

She sleeps tonight in dreamless crown.

And we—her worn, bewildered crew—

Were wrapped in blankets made of you.

But let me tell one thing not said:

When first we came, near full of dread—

The out-of-hours doors were locked up tight,

No soul in sight, no beaconed light.

And in my panic, pure and loud,

I forced the doors, not feeling proud.

Then came the words, quite stern and slick:

“The police are coming. That was quick.”

Yet no one came in cuffs or cars—

Just healing hands and midnight stars.

And though I slept on hard, cold stone,

Those hours felt like home alone.

So take our thanks, and take our tears,

You’ve earned them both, across the years.

In every badge, each name tag worn,

A gentle giant there is born.

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Response from Yvonne Devenney, Ward Manager, Ward 6 & 16 Children's Altnagelvin ( W&C), WHSCT 2 months ago
Yvonne Devenney
Ward Manager, Ward 6 & 16 Children's Altnagelvin ( W&C),
WHSCT
Submitted on 08/05/2025 at 12:48
Published on Care Opinion at 12:48


Dear Horse123

My name is Yvonne and I am the Ward Manager in the Children's Ward in Altnagelvin.

I hope you are well and your daughter is recovering from her accident. She is a brave girl. Your poem is a pleasure to read, it really describes your journey and the emotions you all experienced. You have a real gift with words. Thank you for taking the time to write it. I have shared it with the staff and they are delighted that you were happy with the care your daughter received. They all wish you and your daughter all the best.

Kinest regards

Yvonne

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Update posted by Horse123 (a service user)

Thanks Yvonne, though I do write poetry and have always done I used chat GPT with this one and was too exhausted to edit it. Anyway it did a pretty good job of what I fed into it and it would have taken a lot to improve it. The whole experience with you all was absolutely amazing and I needed to say thanks as soon as possible. Our daughter is terrified about getting the pins removed and my wife tells me I have to stay at home. She is a lot tougher but our daughter will want us both there. I’ve tried to explain the procedure to her, showing her a video I found of another child that allowed the cameras in to help other kids but the thought of no pain relief is terrifying though I understand the risks of too much anaesthesia. Fingers crossed. Thanks again to you all.

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