"I would edit as follows: I currently ..."
About: Clatterbridge Hospital Clatterbridge Hospital Wirral CH63 4JY
Posted by Michael Goodman (as ),
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I would edit as follows: I currently attend two clinics at Clatterbridge Hospital (Rheumatology) & (Oncology) I can not speak too highly of the attention I have received from all personnel. As such I have written to Wirral NHS advising of the care, attention and treatment. Although it has never been confirmed I believe action undertaken by a Consultant identified a stage 2 cancer and the speedy treatment of this condition by Radiology and Nursing staff have extended my life.
I can not thank these people enough.
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